my dreams
I have many dreams, but definitely the greatest one i have is to travel with my family to egipt and get to know the pyramids. Another place I want to visit is Jerusalem, for learning about Jesus Christ's history. No doubt that these dreams are important if i am always in tha company of my wife and daughters, because their happiness makes me even happier.
Hi Alvaro! Good Job but You have to be careful with uppercase
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ResponderEliminarHi Alvaro! Nice composition.
ResponderEliminarBut also I'm agree with Ana and I think you can make a longer composition, too; answering questions like: What places are you going to visit in Jerusalem and in Egipt? or What are you going to do there?
Just an advice!
Hi Alvaro, this is a good blog, but you have a little mistake in a phrase, is the company,not tha company, but is a good composition.Good luck.
ResponderEliminarHEY, ALVARO HELLO AGAIN, THE ADVICE FOR TODAY IS ...JAJAJAJA YOU'VE FALLEN IN MY JOKE, WELL,IN THE PHRASE "if i am always in tha company of my wife and daughters", BESIDE BEING WRONG "THE" THE CORRECT VERB IS "GO WITH", THEN, THE PHRASE WOULD BE "IF I AM ALWAYS GOING WITH MY WIFE AND DAUGHTERS"
ResponderEliminarIT'S A ADVICE, OK.